Friday, March 8, 2013

Can you just whisper that into my ear once more?


I felt his presence before, but always ignored it because I believed that my paranoid state of mind was resurfacing. I had promised my yoga teacher that when this happened again that I would find a safe place to breathe through my nose while visualizing a white light blanketing my shaky soul.

But this time it was different and I knew I had to go to a higher source to get my answer. So I called 311 and whispered into the phone, “I think someone is trying to break into my heart.” And a bold voice that was choking back a belly laugh said before hanging up for the sixth time, “Just go for it. Life is too damn short.”

8 comments:

  1. Ha! I love this. Very clever, my friend.

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  2. So amazing! Five sentences seems like such a simple task - yet it is a brutally difficult task that you, dear Elizabeth, carry out with aplomb! Your friend, Merna

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  3. You said a great deal here in five sentences, both within the words and between them. It leaves me wondering, "but what if...." Very well written!

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  4. I love this piece! Very imaginative. (I wish I could follow you!)
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  5. A very good story, indeed life is too short.

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  6. I love this piece; a very imaginative use of the prompt. I love the line 'someone is trying to break into my heart'. x

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  7. Love this, fantastically whimsical

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