Friday, June 28, 2013

House Sitting



She found herself taking in all that the view had to offer and the excitement reminded her of the first time Marlon had placed a kiss on her in high school.  
The enormous glass walls made her feel vulnerable and she walked over to the front door. She stopped and looked over at the woman who was tapping on the kitchen island with her French manicure.
Jennifer decided that the time was right and there was no looking back.  She cleared her throat and announced to the impatient woman and the spirit of Marlon who was probably flying over her head right then, “Okay, I will take the house and I am going to pay cash for it.”


Lillie McFerrin Writes

7 comments:

  1. Welcome back! Sounds like your character will be starting over in a beautiful place.

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  2. Good! Enjoyed both the visit and the read!
    Scott
    Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/06/28/fsf-five-sentence-fiction-62813-final-viewing/

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  3. A very enjoyable read that leaves itself open for so much more!

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  4. I was surprised she bought a house that made her feel vulnerable, but I'm guessing the spirit of Marlon was the deciding factor! But as others have said, this could just be the start of the story!

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  5. I love the idea of Marlon flying over her head as she made the decision to purchase a new home. New start for her and Marlon? Can't wait to read more.

    barbara @ www.allmylivesnow.com

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  6. I love the idea of Marlon being in the picture as she made her decision. I'm hoping that she won't feel vulnerable with Marlon being there. Such a romantic read. x


    http://40somethingundomesticateddevil.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/five-sentence-fiction-view-part-4-zoe.html

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  7. Ooooh. I love the image of Marlon flying over her.

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